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www.snazz.de v2
by snazz
v2 of theDesign. Critique Please
Number of views: 582
Dated Submitted: May. 07 '08

May. 07 '08

gthobbs said:

Looks nice but more like a mark for a composer. The S looks like a treble clef and the Zs look like rests.

May. 07 '08

kellyoneill said:

I'm loving the red! :) It is a bit hard to read on the gray, but this one is definitely my favorite of the two!

May. 07 '08

cobaltcow said:

great work - but i think you can massage the join from the final z to the swoosh, it seems to take a bit of a sudden kick.

May. 08 '08

snazz said:

Thanks :).
@Cobaltcow:
what do you mean with: "the join from the final z to the swoosh".
what is the swoosh?
Im sorry, im german and i have a little problem with special words like this.

Have a nice day.

May. 08 '08

kellyoneill said:

The "swoosh" is the tail part that comes off of the "z" to the right. It's that beautiful curvy line :)

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