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EL CAMPIRANO
by mentelibre1
EL CAMPIRANO ES UNA EMPRESA DE CORDOBA Y SE DEDICA A LA VENTA DE CHILES EN RAJAS, TIPO NACHOS Y MAS, COMERCIALIZADO EN LATAS Y BOLSAS
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Dated Submitted: May. 05 '08

May. 06 '08

cerise said:

I think this looks quite cool, except the back of the cape tends to look a little rough. Maybe take away the gaps between the cape and the leaf so that it looks more like the man is stepping out from the leaf. Nice colours.

May. 08 '08

chazthetic said:

almost a great illustration.

The gaps between the lines aren't even and are really throwing my eye off. I like the concept, it just needs refinement.

May. 27 '08

McGuire Design said:

love the illustration and all your logos you have nice fun typography work.

May. 29 '08

mentelibre1 said:

por el tipo de concepto de este cliente no se necesita una tipografia oficial
el nombre junto con otros datos de el producto van de la mano y es que solo asi se comunica lo que se desea (por cuestiones regionales)

saludos: Chazthetic, McGuire Design, Cerise

gracias por los comentarios!

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