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Foster
by mucho
Logo redesign for a chocolate fortune candies.
Number of views: 1700
Dated Submitted: May. 02 '08
Added to Gallery: May. 03 '08

May. 02 '08

OcularInk said:

I'm wondering if this logo would be more effective all on one line. Something about the curve on the type seems off. Even so, another great logo. :-)

May. 03 '08

mucho said:

well, let me not agree ;) - here we have a "fairy" atmosphere and this must be shown in some not so traditional composition

May. 04 '08

OcularInk said:

I still think the type looks funny on a curve. ;-)

May. 04 '08

mucho said:

it is your right :) ... different ppl different tastes

May. 04 '08

grubedoo said:

I like the text on a curve. But the type needs adjustment so the curve is properly curvacious. After the letter T the visual curve created by the letters T, E, & R takes a sharp turn south and makes the curve feel awkward.

I would also try tying in the text with the horn a bit so you get a sense of Foster as music played by the nymph.

May. 04 '08

OcularInk said:

@ mucho : The logo is great and it has lots of character. I'm just being nit-picky. You're obviously a very talented designer. :-) If you take some of grubedoo's points into consideration, this would be even better. Best regards.

May. 04 '08

mucho said:

10x guys, i promise as soon as possible to check put your advises ;)

Aug. 13 '08

nima.jazireh said:

Very fresh mucho, great.

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