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Client work Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- Harness Racing Victoria
- by cerise
- Updated smaller text
- Number of views: 6516
- Dated Submitted: Apr. 30 '08
- Added to Gallery: May. 03 '08
May. 04 '08
OcularInk said:I agree with cobalt. The mark has great style and colors, but I'm having a hard time relating the mark with the type.
May. 04 '08
grubedoo said:The mark is very interesting and beautifully illustrated. The type fights with the mark.
May. 06 '08
sandhya said:I like the style of the image, but the type needs work. I guess you already realize it :) Good luck convincing the client!
Oct. 28 '08
revolvedesign said:I really like this design, however... as for the colours, I am not liking the gradient, as I have a very strong feeling it is one of the default (radial) ones in illustrator. But other than that, really nice work IMO :D
Nov. 20 '08
INSOMNISDESIGN said:Hey.. originally from west Auckland but moved around a bit - living in Taupo. Those Aussie summers are tempting!
Nov. 28 '08
THEArtistT said:Best design in your showcase so far. I don't know why I passed it by before. As a designer for a very specific industry, it must be hard coming up with new design treatments for essentially the same subject over and over. You're doing a spectacular job.
Jan. 08 '09
lundeja said:First time I've seen this and wow I don't know how I missed it. You earn my highly sought after "delicious" label on this one.
Mar. 02 '09
Mason Roberts said:Perhaps a script font would help? Or maybe your own handwritten style vectorized??
Mar. 03 '09
hindmarshdesign said:did they change the font? install it upside down? space the elements wrongly???? Seriously you have to watch signage people every step of the way...like vultures they pull apart your work and then even have the guts to regurgitate you a proof of your logo with a brand new font!
Okay that was a generalisation but i have too many bad experiences!
Mar. 03 '09
hindmarshdesign said:and for all those smar alecs, yes i outline everything and group it so they don't get the wrong impression.
Mar. 04 '09
theartistt said:Lost a job once because I believed what a print rep told me. Promised she could deliver but her company could not. It was a nightmare. It was a huge project and a lot went right and I was able to solve one problem no one thought could be solved, but all it takes is one dropped ball. No matter how much you trust your vendors, you should always keep on top of every thing. Like you learn everything you can about your client's businesses, you have to know your vendor's business, too.
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Apr. 30 '08
cobaltcow said:nice use of colour - however i feel that the image and text are not balanced (maybe a little bottom-heavy).