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Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- mantis
- by Fogra
- maybe I like bugs...
- Number of views: 3133
- Dated Submitted: Apr. 24 '08
- Added to Gallery: Apr. 27 '08
Apr. 24 '08
OcularInk said:Yea, I agree, the shadow is off. Fogra, have you tried starting the shadow from the bugs legs?
Apr. 24 '08
grubedoo said:I like it.
The shadow on the mantis doesn't add anything and there seems to be a lack of hierarchy between the lettermark and icon. One or the other needs to be dominant. Just my thoughts.
Apr. 24 '08
fogra said:Sorry. I didn't realise how much it was bugging you all ;p
Apr. 24 '08
alto said:I don't mean to be a pest, :) but the shadow needs to go or be changed as suggested above.
Apr. 25 '08
Mesa Designs said:Great illustration, and the text is perfect. Nice work :)
Apr. 27 '08
fogra said:@Firebrand: I was too afraid to ask myself :)
Apr. 27 '08
fogra said:No. I was too afraid to ask gthobbs. Was that a literal question, Roy? If it wasn't, then I'm sorry :)
Apr. 27 '08
fogra said:That's okay - I usually walk into those ones.
Apr. 27 '08
gthobbs said:No, it was a completely random line. I had just watched Dan In Real Life. Steve Correll delivered this line during dinner to much the same confusion. Pardon my lack of continuity :-)
Apr. 29 '08
dazonic said:I'm sure I've seen that image before... is it a trace? The one I've got in mind was a wallpaper, white background. Maybe from stock.xchng? mandolux?
Apr. 30 '08
benjancewicz said:I like this. The shadow looks funny, though. Maybe a blur on the edge?
May. 01 '08
BreadMilkandButter said:This looks great. I would loose the shadow though.
May. 05 '08
dromecin said:You should take a look of this, and maybe reconsider your carer as a graphic designer, copy is not an option
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-SkQZf1cJMA
http://www.mantisproducciones.cl/
May. 05 '08
dromecin said:I forgot, the vectorization is not good, i know maybe you take this image from www.sxc.hu (as i do) but i tried to vectorize it in a better way
May. 06 '08
fogra said:@dromecin: Before you started accusing me of copying your work you should get your facts right beforehand. I was never aware of your logo, even though I did do research before I uploaded it and I do apologise for any upset caused. Oh and I'm quite happy to continue with my career as I'm sure that you are also :)
May. 06 '08
smartinup said:gthobbs: i just watched that, and laughed hard when i read your comment.
May. 21 '08
ing.matt said:The shadow looked great when this image was a thumbnail, but when I clicked on it and saw the enlarged version, it was kind of off-putting. Nice job, though.
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Apr. 24 '08
OcularInk said:Nice. Bugs give most people the creeps though. Even so, this is stylish. :-)