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- Clublife v4
- by Dangeruss Design
- Logo for retirement home. Wanted to focus upon the word "life", so I created a butterfly using two leaf shapes.
- Number of views: 2206
- Dated Submitted: Apr. 23 '08
- Added to Gallery: Apr. 24 '08
Apr. 25 '08
dangeruss design said:Yeah it is a little odd name for a retirement home, but hey, I have seen worse. :)
The typeface is custom starting from Minion, got rid of some serifs here and there...but thanks for the support everyone!
Apr. 26 '08
OcularInk said:Nice job on the type. I agree with grubedoo about the 'C'. Other than that, nice work. And even if the name is odd, you didn't pick it. :-)
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Apr. 24 '08
grubedoo said:I like the symbolism of a butterfly (an insect in it's final stage of life, but also it's most glorious). The type is solid, the C could move a little closer to the L. I love the letter f. It's just a weird name for a retirement home but that's not your fault.