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Coast
by webbous
Logo for a ladies swim and leisure store based in Sydney.
Number of views: 4138
Dated Submitted: Apr. 22 '08
Added to Gallery: Apr. 24 '08

Apr. 22 '08

gthobbs said:

I like the mark but not 100% sure about the font or text placement. Don't get me wrong...it might be the best solution sitting where it's at. But what would it look like above and to the right side. When I think of coast I think of a horizon line. The text above might reinforce that. Just a thought. I'd love to see some layout options.

Apr. 24 '08

danielcarranza said:

Very nice... I love it.
Honestly it'll probably be a pain to implement on many circumstances, but I just adore it. Very fresh, a lot of texture... awesome.

Apr. 24 '08

SpiffyJ said:

The streak is great. But my first thought was the type may get lost when the logo is small.

Apr. 25 '08

trulywelsh said:

wow....that is absolutely brilliant! well done!

Apr. 27 '08

neogrey said:

Do you actually need the dot after Coast? It's not a sentence but a logo, I assume :D

May. 02 '08

Desert said:

I think the whole thing works (including the dot). Provides that subtle bit of impact to an altogether calming logo.

Great stuff!

May. 10 '08

huyendesigner said:

yep, I agree with gthobbs that it not 100% sure but I like it

May. 10 '08

huyendesigner said:

Some different layout options are the good way for you to make it better !

May. 23 '08

girlandetc said:

I agree that the text needs some work - I dislike the period. Maybe bolding it up? The streak is fantastic though!

Jul. 13 '08

rajibdas said:

The font size/placement can make it have a more impact. Otherwise the colous are just great.

Jul. 22 '08

SUPRIMO said:

en fotocopia no se va a identificar la marca

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