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NASDVA
by Relevant
Veteran's advocacy organization.
Number of views: 2068
Dated Submitted: Apr. 12 '08
Added to Gallery: Apr. 13 '08

Apr. 12 '08

ClimaxDesigns said:

dache, kinetics, whats wrong with this one? purely opening up discussion not attacking anyone.


Apr. 12 '08

Relevant said:

Any suggestions are appreciated. That's what I'm here for. You guys notice little things I don't sometimes.

As a side note, I believe kinetics has sunk 95% of my logos. Go figure.


Apr. 13 '08

Relevant said:

Ha! Dache has apparently sunk every one of my new logos. I feel special.


Apr. 13 '08

dache said:

ClimaxDesigns : As I have already explained, if it does not inspire me it is sunk.

Relevant: If you wish to receive suggestions use the green flag.
"Dache has apparently sunk every one of my new logos."

This statement is incorrect. Kindly look at all your newl uploadly images and you will see this. Also dache does not have an uppercase 'D'.


Apr. 13 '08

ClimaxDesigns said:

dache, what did we just talk about on IM man come on! ffs


Apr. 13 '08

bartodell said:

Relevant. Nice one old friend. Ignore Dache. We all do. :)


Apr. 13 '08

OcularInk said:

Nice work, Relevant.

Lol @ Bart

The truth is, if you add some bright and shiny colors, then it might get floated by DACHE. Whoops...to many capital letters there. I mean, dache. Cause apparently, a logo is only successful and inspiring if it has bright and shiny colors.


Apr. 13 '08

nido said:

i dont wana jump on the bandwagon here... but i just get this urge to say that some people bring it on themselves!..& the worst thing is they dont even notice it!

Anyway... i do like this, very strong mark & matching type... nice work relevant.


Apr. 13 '08

firebrand said:

The addition of 'Most Sinks' is quite revealing. Beats me how they've clock up so many in such a short time. Cynicism?


Apr. 13 '08

ClimaxDesigns said:

@firebrand, i guess, going to make a stats page with the top 50 each of these, got tons of stats man thought i'd share.


Apr. 13 '08

Relevant said:

@dache: I thought I had a green flag on this one. It has one now. ;)

@everyone: Thanks for the comments!


Apr. 13 '08

Lawrence Anderson said:

I like this one. The bird kind of doubles as a place to me because of how the eyes resemble the windshield of a plane. My one issue is that the shield seems to lose some of its power when it is "cut" by the bottom of the bird. To me, a shield should be one solid piece and the bird is a "chink" in the armor in this case.


Apr. 14 '08

OcularInk said:

Hey Relevant, not trying to jack your thread, but I feel I came off fairly rude with my previous comment towards dache. Just wanted to make a public apology to him. Sorry, dache.


Apr. 14 '08

itsgareth said:

Im not sure it needs the two tone 3D effect as it makes the bird look flat.


Apr. 14 '08

kriecheque said:

yeah, i agree with gareth. the two-tones don't really add much...would be stronger without them


May. 16 '08

cresk said:

I don't do votes, but this one is fat ~ !


Jun. 24 '08

TECHNEO said:

love it, but the '3d' is a doubt for me (too)...
if you flatten the image it's even as strong, i guess.


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