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Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- salon
- by onesummer
- concept for a salon in Sag Harbor.
- Number of views: 2623
- Dated Submitted: Mar. 30 '08
- Added to Gallery: Mar. 31 '08
Mar. 31 '08
OcularInk said:I think there's a way to connect the 'F' like shape with the 'S' shape. Just might take a little time developing. Even if you connected it as is, the 'H' would then be more prominent and there would be an 'S' in the negative space of the 'H'.
Mar. 31 '08
OcularInk said:Exactly what David said. It's also very easy to stare at your own design for so long that the little details can be overlooked. That is why Logopond kicks so much a$$!! You get comments on your work from all different angles.
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Mar. 31 '08
smartinup said:real nice. my eyes first picked up an 'F" then an "S". I thought you were trying to spell soemthing out for the lnogest time. then i picked up on the H. My mind went right away to a tropical fish in the thumbnail window.