• I am actively looking for critiques
Project Red Dot
by Brandsimplicity
Used concept for organization that supplies clean free laptops to African schools.
Number of views: 650
Dated Submitted: Mar. 29 '08

Mar. 29 '08

jayred said:

That's really nice. Only thing I'm curious about is why two of the three shapes have random holes in the line while the rotated rectangle does not.

Mar. 29 '08

24/7 said:

It's because there's a negative space version of the rounded rectangles (laptop screens?) throughout the other shapes. I like this approach, but I'm not confident about the necessity of the third geometric shape.

Apr. 04 '08

brandsimplicity said:

@jayred
Its telling a story,old laptop...Africa...clean laptop. Maybe ole Africa could be a solid line. Thanks bud

@24/7
Your on to it! Maybe the same message could work with just two shapes.

Please login/register to make a comment, registration is easy, signup