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- Isaac Jones
- by artboy
- Another slightly simplified version of Isaac's CV logo.
- Number of views: 441
- Dated Submitted: Mar. 20 '08
Mar. 20 '08
gthobbs said:I like the double swoosh version better. This one is still awesome, but the other transcends being just letters for me. Great work regardless.
Mar. 20 '08
KGB said:this one is by far the better of the two. the double is just too much and makes it more complicated than it needs to be.
Mar. 20 '08
nido said:I havent seen the others yet but wanted o stop by & say this is awesome, it so sleek!... i kinda see a 'H' too but wHo cares!.. well done artboy!
Mar. 20 '08
jayred said:Definitely prefer this version over the double swash.
Sep. 14 '08
THEArtistT said:The double swoosh added an M. This one is much better and more beautiful, too.
Sep. 14 '08
THEArtistT said:Just noticed when looking at it in the smaller thumbnail, that you should flip the 'i' so the slant is to the left instead of the right. You had to have it that way for the double swoosh, but for this it would work better flipped. Also, although it isn't readily apparent, having the slant towards the 'j' gives the idea of an 'n' being made by the two letters.
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Mar. 20 '08
Thomas said:Love it! Prefering this version! And love RED! Lower serifs of the "i" look strange for me. What about doing the same than upper ones of the "j"? Also, not sure layout need these white stripes... But you're the designer, you choose :)