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Pacifica Investment Group 2

by Bernard Kowalski • Uploaded: Aug. 29 '06
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Description: This is one of the directions the client has chosen to go with. Any advice on improving?

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

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isms said on Aug. 30 '06

I like the reflection here: that would be the first time it fits as seen here! Colours: ok
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project_underwear said on Aug. 30 '06

I would explore tucking investment group under pacifica. I really enjoy the color scheme. Watch out for the sliver of house at the botom of the transparent purple house. I would drop it down more to stray aways from that tight spot, or push it up to the same level as the others.
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KGB said on Aug. 30 '06

good luck getting this to reproduce in print. Can you get a similar effect with overprinting spot colors, if so, can you talk the client into 4 spot colors? I would make \"investment group\" all caps so it could be smaller but still easily read. You could also shorten the leg on the P to help tuck the IG line closer. Lose the reflection.

mebs said on Sep. 01 '06

i love it! very nice and clean. i agree that \'investment group\' could be tucked up underneath pacifica. making the leg of the p a bit longer would make it fit nicely i think.

bern said on Sep. 01 '06

I have tried that, but the p with a longer leg looks retarded. I\'ve also tried the shorter leg and tucking it up to the whole word a bit, that works a little better. Maybe I\'ll post a link to the other versions later.

identium said on Dec. 26 '06

Very unique!

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