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yoga dia
by joshgomez
Designed for a yoga teacher who teaches private classes. May expand into a studio soon.
Number of views: 417
Dated Submitted: Mar. 08 '08

Mar. 08 '08

jayred said:

This is very nice. I think the mark might be a tad too large right now, however.

Mar. 08 '08

chanpion said:

I dunno. Change the colour on the center circle maybe? It reminded me of a sunny side up at first glance. But keep that orange. Thats really nice.

Mar. 08 '08

joshgomez said:

Thanks for the quick feedback.

@jayred: Great suggestion, I will play with that sizing.

@chanpion: Everyone loves the orange, but never comments on the yellow. Thanks for being honest. I have tried other things, especially since yellow is hardly ever well received - but it just have the thing bloom. I also tried putting some patterns into the yellow, but it becomes too heavy.

Mar. 08 '08

joshgomez said:

oh, one more thing...

That font was thrown in to just get something up. Anyone have suggestions?

Mar. 09 '08

OcularInk said:

The simplicity is nice and the mark is effective. To me, the type matches well. Perhaps slightly modify it by removing the top part of the vertical bars on the a's so that the a's curve around nicely. In regards to Chan's comment about the center color. It could change. But either way, great logo.

Mar. 09 '08

joshgomez said:

@Ocularlnk: Thanks. About the type curving around more, I like that. Maybe remove that nub from the a's, g and d? I'm not too sharp with the pen tool. Do you know of any fonts with this curvy look?

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