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- Gladius
- by djaynoel
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- Number of views: 574
- Dated Submitted: Mar. 04 '08
Mar. 05 '08
hellouriah said:you could refine the negative space more to make it more like a helmet, maybe drop the end on the fern down a bit. Otherwise, its a lovely mark you could turn it into a seal.
Mar. 08 '08
joshgomez said:Google meets USC :) I totally agree with making the transition smoother. The bottom of the G looks weak and thin, like the leaves are going to bend down a crush it.
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Mar. 04 '08
kriecheque said:It'd be cool if you could work out a more gradual transition from the "G" to the stem, but other then that i think it's a solid mark