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- DINO
- by teeps
- Toy Brand for kids
- Number of views: 646
- Date Submitted: Feb. 26 '08
Feb. 27 '08
Lucidity said:I think you still associate it with "Dino" because the N is a dinosaur.
Feb. 27 '08
metaeducation said:Hi teeps,
I have to agree that using this as a letter substitution for "n" just doesn't work. In fact, he's taking up two character positions, and people might start wondering if this is some kind of puzzle for something more obscene that goes di**o. :)
If you just put in a regular "n" and moved the character off to the left of the type I think it would be a significant improvement! I also feel like you might want to smooth the lines on the dinosaur so that he is less jagged and matches the type more closely...
Regards,
metæducation
Feb. 28 '08
teeps said:Thanks a lot for your valuable comments, friends.
Your wish is my command @ metæducation :)
Apr. 22 '09
tokostyler said:yes man, they are right it actually doesnt work that way. n is missing. man im sorry to tell this, but you have to learn the difference between illustration and logo.
Apr. 22 '09
theartistt said:Three things: I think the left bottom leg is turned the wrong direction; the bottom of the dinosaur's feet should line up with the baseline of the text; and this should be a one color logo.
I read it as dino right off, so I don't see the issue with using the dinosaur as the n, it just needs to integrated better.
Jul. 14 '09
teeps said:I don't know, actually I want to make it simple yet detailed, therefore I used some color variations, I believe this can work as a logo and yes m still working on it @ theartistt I will update the final version soon
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Feb. 26 '08
wilsonink said:i read dino, but don't see the "n"