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DINO
by teeps
Toy Brand for kids
Number of views: 333
Dated Submitted: Feb. 26 '08

Feb. 26 '08

wilsonink said:

i read dino, but don't see the "n"

Feb. 26 '08

teeps said:

Well, thats the trick, you can read it as dino with the missing N

Feb. 26 '08

gypseemoth said:

I don't read it at all. I read dido if anything

Feb. 27 '08

Lucidity said:

I think you still associate it with "Dino" because the N is a dinosaur.

Feb. 27 '08

metaeducation said:

Hi teeps,

I have to agree that using this as a letter substitution for "n" just doesn't work. In fact, he's taking up two character positions, and people might start wondering if this is some kind of puzzle for something more obscene that goes di**o. :)

If you just put in a regular "n" and moved the character off to the left of the type I think it would be a significant improvement! I also feel like you might want to smooth the lines on the dinosaur so that he is less jagged and matches the type more closely...

Regards,
metæducation

Feb. 28 '08

teeps said:

Thanks a lot for your valuable comments, friends.

Your wish is my command @ metæducation :)

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