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SharpAs
by insomnisdesign
Concept for a knife company. Think it needs a few tweaks.
Number of views: 331
Dated Submitted: Feb. 23 '08
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Feb. 23 '08

OcularInk said:

Interesting!!

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Feb. 23 '08

gthobbs said:

I like this a lot. Feels good watermarked on a steel blade. The "As" kinda falls off a little. What if they kept their vertical a little more and just elongated to fit the bottom curve.

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Feb. 23 '08

gthobbs said:

P.S. The leading edge of the blade might need a much thinner line than the rest of the mark so it feels "sharp"

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Feb. 23 '08

insomnisdesign said:

Re:gthobbs. Thanks for your comments.. yeah i see what you mean about 'As' falling off, needs to be all aligned & uniform.. And yeah, a sharp knife might help! Marty

Feb. 27 '08

metaeducation said:

This is good, I'm a fan!

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Nov. 16 '08

martha said:

Nice work

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