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Chateau d Anet
by drewboy
Proposal for the Chateau d Anet near Paris, built in the 16th Century for Diane de Poitiers. The mark is supposed to represent an A.
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Dated Submitted: Feb. 21 '08
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Feb. 21 '08

KGB said:

nice, but I think the proportions are off a bit. It seems too much like 2 separate elements. and the apostrophe should be curved a bit. what you have there is a mark that represents one foot.

Feb. 21 '08

drewboy said:

You're right about the apostrophe KGB - I need to create a curved version. It's a first draft, so I'm still playing around with the elements. Do you think the mark is too big in relation to the text?

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Feb. 21 '08

KGB said:

I think so, but if it gets smaller, you may have to "fatten" up the ribbon that makes the mark.

Feb. 22 '08

drewboy said:

Thanks for the feedback KGB - I'll work on a revised version.

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