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I am actively looking for critiques
- labelshop v2
- by Chanpion
- WIP. Second concept I am quite happy with. This version incorporated the type and mark together but still has the 'L'. Comments welcome.
- Number of views: 613
- Dated Submitted: Feb. 17 '08
Feb. 17 '08
firebrand said:This one's great Chan! The L isn't quite so apparent...not that it matters at all.
Feb. 18 '08
steve-oc said:The idea works, but you should leave out the yellow background - just present it on white - as it drains the colours. I'd maybe like to see the peeling aspect affect the type a little and be from the corner rather than straight.
Feb. 18 '08
chanpion said:Thanks folks for the feedback. I see what you guys mean. I'll keep working on it.
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Feb. 17 '08
ali said:Nice label :D