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Intrinsic
by evancalkins
My New Company Logo
Number of views: 208
Dated Submitted: Feb. 15 '08

Feb. 15 '08

jayred said:

Overall, quite nice. Two suggestions for you:

1) Creative services is a bit hard to read since it's so thin and small. Either increase the weight by one step or the pt size by 1 or 2.
2) The r is really bugging me because it doesn't feel like it's part of the original font whereas the i's do. I think you need some rounding to the upper left corner of the r to make it more natural.

Feb. 16 '08

evancalkins said:

Thanks for the suggestion jayred, I'll give that a go.

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