KAKADU CAFE

by JacekJaniczak • Uploaded: Sep. 27 '16 - Gallerized: Oct. '16

0d1593146801e5060b1950532dbab461.png

Lets Discuss

Logoflow Sep. 27 '16

I think it's too spiky, especially that branch the bird sit on it and the ornament beneath the typo. It looks like barbwire ;) Straight line would be better in my oppinion :) Composition and estethic are marveles!

Reply
logoboom Sep. 29 '16

I like. I agree the barbs might just be clutter. But more importantly, it's getting a little pinched, especially around the foot, tail feathers, branch.

Reply
artmns2 Oct. 02 '16

I would change the font. And I got rid of the very fine details

Reply

Please login/signup to make a comment, registration is easy