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- Heathdale BBQ Festival 2005
- by Hayes Image
- Selected logotype for the annual community fundraising event. Everyone arrives at the local park with their BBQ's. Cooking competitions & other festivities take place.
- Number of views: 429
- Dated Submitted: Feb. 07 '08
Feb. 07 '08
Hayes Image said:I don't disagree with you about the plainness, I did do a few quirkier & more expressive versions...but this is the one they ended up choosing.
If I can find those other versions, I'll put them up :)
Feb. 07 '08
Hayes Image said:Do you think it needed more cowbell?
Feb. 07 '08
OcularInk said:There's something nice about this. I agree with rfrusso in regards to the type, but the client wins in the end. :-P Even so, cool concept. You might want to move the hot dog slightly to the left. Like a pixel or two. Haha. Keep up the great work, Hayes!!
Feb. 07 '08
drewboy said:I like the simplicity & the colours. In fact I like it all Hayes! Only comments - a more rounded sans serif font would have been good. Something like VAG Rounded. That would have tied in more with your hotdog. Also (nitpicking) I wouldn't have added the handle of the spatula - just extend the tail of the Q... enough ranting - Nice work as usual!!
Feb. 07 '08
Hayes Image said:@OcularInk; Yeah clients ruin everything:P Yeah I showed 3 designs; this, a 2nd version of this with a more 'artsy' type treatment & another which the text was like grill lines on a brown circle, so it looked like a patty.
@Drew;Yeah I can see what your saying, allot of the things you suggested there were tried in the experimenting process..but as it seemed, they thought this design was pretty 'out there' as is.
Cheers guys :)
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Feb. 07 '08
rfrusso said:I love the Q/spatula concept and just noticed on the larger image the little hot dog. Haha that's great! But I think the rest of the type - like in 'Heathdale' - is a bit plain. Something a bit more fun may portray community/fundraising/BBQ a bit better...