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mixdisc
by ryantoyota
A personal project. I do mix CDs for family for birthday and Christmas presents, and I suddenly realized I had a branding opportunity there. Still in progress. I'm thinking of calling it "mixdisc by ryan" but haven't got to the "by ryan" yet.
Number of views: 2250
Date Submitted: Feb. 02 '08
Added to Gallery: Feb. 03 '08

Feb. 03 '08

ryantoyota said:

Any comments on the typography? Is the M too thin? Too short? Is the X too wide? Too tall?

I drew the type myself referencing a font I found, but I didn't like everything about the font, so I'm trying to perfect it.

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Feb. 03 '08

firebrand said:

Looks well balanced to me, Ryan. The s is a nice touch.

Feb. 04 '08

drewboy said:

I like it - only comment: the transition between the 'i' & the 's' could be a bit smoother, more curved, rounded. It's a bit clunky at the moment.

Feb. 04 '08

cpignatelli said:

I especially like the "x." The "m" does look a touch short. Very cool though.

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Feb. 04 '08

Hayes Image said:

Yeah I like it, just the bottom-left corner of the 2nd I could use a nicer curve to go with the transition into the S.

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Feb. 04 '08

logomotive said:

I think m could be opened up a wee bit, but really I think the x is throwing the whole thing off.

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Dec. 16 '08

yummie said:

tpye breaks a bit betweem the i and the s...

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