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Gravity: by Idil; ...; Number of views: 5343; Dated Submitted: Jan. 31 '08; Added to Gallery: Feb. 03 '08

Jan. 31 '08

ahab said:

I dig the concept.

Why the red "G"? Just curious.

Jan. 31 '08

grubedoo said:

Intelligent visual pun. Work the kerning, especially between the a and v. I might simplify the apple stem and leaf area. I was going to ask about the red g as well.

Feb. 01 '08

cpignatelli said:

clever. Is the drop-shadow on the type necessary? It might look better without it.

Feb. 01 '08

AlexWende said:

Great concept & simplicity! I agree with grubedoo & cpignatelli..

Feb. 01 '08

idil said:

thanks ahab, the red 'g' is a beginners mistake.:D

thanks a lot grubedoo. I haven't noticed the a and v up until now thanks for poiting it out. I'll definitely work on the leaf and stem.

thanks cpignatelli, the drop-shadow might not be necessary I'll see how it looks without it.

thank you all for the feedback it really helps me to better improve meself. :)

Feb. 01 '08

logomotive said:

gosh, you could almost make the lower part of the "g" (the negative space) an apple as if it was pulling or hanging for gravity, just a thought.

Feb. 02 '08

ahab said:

No problem. This looks complete. This is a good one.

Feb. 02 '08

Art Machine said:

Nice, but wouldn't it make more sense to show the apple falling?

Feb. 04 '08

sisudesigns said:

It needs the drop shadow or other wise it'd resemble the Apple mark too much.

Its ok.

Feb. 04 '08

ryantoyota said:

I love the type on this. That g is sweet.

Feb. 04 '08

cpignatelli said:

I agree, the "g" is great.

Feb. 05 '08

spiral said:

love the concept. i think the apple's shadow is needed to show it's not floating in space, but would probably make the highlight in the apple a bit more prominent so it looks more dimensional

Feb. 05 '08

dariux said:

That's all, as like me: very plane. Good concept. Congratulations!

Feb. 07 '08

wilsonink said:

omg! beautifull! :O love the typo.

Feb. 07 '08

stevo said:

Love the font... what is it?

Feb. 07 '08

Spiffyj said:

Outstanding concept and execution. This mark just goes to show that all those "web 2.0" logos out there are missing the mark. A good logo doesn't need bevels, reflections or extraneous drop shadows. Well done.