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Real or Fake client not set I am actively looking for critiques
- Frameworks
- by rambal
- Client is basically doing the frame works for photographs, paintings and artworks. I'm looking for your valuable comments.
- Number of views: 2298
- Date Submitted: Jan. 30 '08
- Added to Gallery: Jan. 30 '08
Jan. 30 '08
b3nder said:I like the concept although I find the cuts out of the R's and K a little distracting. I think that a simple bold serif would do the trick, much the same as what you have got but without the embellishments.
Jan. 30 '08
row said:I like the idea here Rambal, but I agree with B3nder, the letters r and k are a little hard to read, maybe try make the rest of the typeface with out the cut outs and the f a little bit bigger so that it still reads well.
Jan. 30 '08
logomotive said:Nice idea here Rambal, I think the placement is great and see what you are trying to do with the frame angle. I agree with others here, might look best if you eliminate the cuts on the letters and if you must bring the left side of the frame down or make frame slightl larger so you can also bring the F down slightly and crossbar over a hair, due to the cuts it looks smaller than the rest of the letters. I love the simplicity and layout.
Jan. 30 '08
rambal said:Thanks a lot friends.
This time I'm very much concentrate for the type.
I admire so many type work here from various peoples.
For me this is the begining.
Once again I thank for all the supporters and for the valuable comments.
I'll take forward your comments.
Thanks.
Jan. 30 '08
weblok said:nice work with the F . I had done a logo for 'frameworks' a firm thats into editing. Ill post the logo soon :)
Feb. 01 '08
Lawrence Anderson said:I think just keep the cutting effect on the F. The others are a bit distracting.
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Jan. 30 '08
Hayes Image said:hmmm, clean, simple...I like it :)