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HJ Nicholls & Sons
by naekie
This company does fruit packing and distributing. HJN started the company 50 years ago and is well known in the industry.
Number of views: 419
Dated Submitted: Jan. 24 '08

Jan. 24 '08

itsgareth said:

hey id love to see this without the arc on the type. you could possibly keep the one on the mark or maybe use better placement.

Jan. 25 '08

naekie said:

thanks, will try that!

Jan. 29 '08

squarelogo said:

I agree. The mark is great, but the text needs to be simpler.

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