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- TEXTURA 01
- by Muamer
- Fashion Brand
- Number of views: 2000
- Dated Submitted: Jan. 11 '08
- Added to Gallery: Aug. 29 '08
Jan. 11 '08
AlexWende said:I like the mark very nice. Clahsmore is right, that "R" is a little bit annyoing it caught my Eye too.
Jan. 11 '08
OcularInk said:That's a great icon and a very nice logo!! I don't completely mind the 'R'. It gives the type treatment some character. However, in the other's defenses, the same effect could have been applied to one of the other letter forms and been a little less obtrusive.
Jan. 11 '08
AlexWende said:Yes, thats a good option ocularink! I think it also brings the typo closer to the mark and makes it more harmonic!
Jan. 11 '08
jayred said:Definitely agree with you there clashmore. No way that this is plagiarism in any way.
I think it's a great mark. I would have to agree with the others, though, that although the R is interesting, it really does bother me. Everything else just flows really cleanly and that doesn't.
Jan. 12 '08
MoonboxDesign said:Wow. This is very impressive work. The R is a little interesting... but I like it that way. Very nice job on the mark.
Jan. 13 '08
rambal said:nice one..
R have some problem. already X is crossed.
so R also having the same kind of cross line instead of having Lshape
Oct. 13 '08
actiondesigner said:So you know how it feels :) Lovely mark and typetreatment. Memorable
Nov. 14 '08
hipcheck said:very nice, but I agree about the R as well... seems okay to have diagonals in the type, seeing as how there's an X there... and from the bottom of the main image, I can see you doing something more with the R, like trailing it off in one direction
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Jan. 11 '08
clashmore said:That R bugs me. Otherwise, nice.