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santa clara
by lalohead
a work in progress, it's for a new residential area here in Chihuahua Mexico, the client was looking for an ilustrative image
Number of views: 658
Dated Submitted: Jan. 09 '08

Jan. 10 '08

artboy said:

Really nice illustration. Shame we can't zoom in and view the detail a bit closer!

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Jan. 10 '08

sdijock said:

Beautiful mark. My only comment would be to remove the tiny dot (cloud?) in the upper left corner near the light rule - it looks like a mistake and isn't necessary. While I'm at it, I also don't think you need to create the mountains out of a series of horizontal lines - keep the mountains solid. The mark would look just as nice without that effect.

Jan. 10 '08

lalohead said:

thank you guys!!, well, that tiny dot in the upper left corner, it was a mistake, now is gonne!!! jojojo tks sdijock!! n_n!!

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Feb. 08 '08

nido said:

This is beautiful!...

Feb. 09 '08

lalohead said:

tks a lot nido!! :D

Mar. 10 '08

t3graphics said:

I agree with sdijock on the cloud thing but disagree as to the horizontal lines. They add a great texture to the mark that would probably be missed were they not there.

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Mar. 10 '08

gthobbs said:

The horizontal lines feel like an engraved illustration, but the clouds feel like a halftone. Both look good but IMO they don't jive with each other.

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