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by marketingwings
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Number of views: 287
Dated Submitted: Dec. 28 '07

Dec. 28 '07

admarcbart said:

I do not see the wings aspect, however this would be a killer brand with it as just a drop shadow only. Meaning, loose the very thin outline on the type and let the negative space determine the type by itslef. It will save you headaches in reproduction.


Dec. 28 '07

indesun said:

I agree.


Dec. 28 '07

clashmore said:

Is this one word or two? If it's the latter, then the P and A pairing needs to be tightened up. If it's the former, maybe a little more space is needed. And I think Bart's right about keeping just the shadow.


Dec. 28 '07

marketingwings said:

hey guys, thanks for your comments. its a single word "U P A N I", i am learning from you guys lot from last few months, i will try to impliment on your suggestion - thanks again.


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