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City Drinking: by itsgareth; Community website which outlines the hot drinking spots for the upper class.; Number of views: 4080; Dated Submitted: Dec. 27 '07; Added to Gallery: Dec. 30 '07

Dec. 27 '07

OcularInk said:

Clever concept. How about adding a few windows in the buildings?

Dec. 27 '07

itsgareth said:

Hey oc, I tried that but it effected the scalability :(

Dec. 27 '07

OcularInk said:

Hmm, good point. What about a dome top on one or something of that nature? Even so, it's still pretty neat.

Dec. 27 '07

Hayes Image said:

What about a moon behind the buildings?

Dec. 27 '07

thelaw said:

It's a nice, simple logo but I would definitely try a different variety of rooftop shapes. They're all flat at the moment. Throw in a couple of triangle shapes or something, maybe an antenna or two. The type could use some more development as well. Good concept overall.

Dec. 28 '07

indesun said:

that's a nice concept. like it.

Dec. 28 '07

reddskinn said:

nice concept. I think does not need details like the shadows or shines

Dec. 29 '07

brandsimplicity said:

Hey Im lovin the concept,have you considered using a lighter grey on the foreground glass edge?

Dec. 29 '07

itsgareth said:

Thanks for all the encouraging comments everyone, what do you think of the update?

Dec. 30 '07

brandsimplicity said:

Hope you don't mind,but I had a play with it.See how the glass now has more depth ?

http://www.brandsimplicity.com.au/cityfun.html

Dec. 30 '07

Hayes Image said:

Yeah Brandsimplisticity's version does add more realism to the glass...

Nice work on the new rooftops Gareth, city's got a more livelier feel to it now.

Dec. 30 '07

itsgareth said:

Of course I don't mind Brandsimplicity, I'll happily take advice from a seasoned pro ;) I owe you one. Thanks for the help guys, I think this is just abiout finished now.

Dec. 30 '07

ClimaxDesigns said:

ah has that dan cederholm feel , looks awesome, thats not an insult btw dan's work is simplistically great and this is also

Dec. 30 '07

itsgareth said:

cheers climax, means a lot

Dec. 30 '07

Respiro said:

This is a BIG one, Gareth! Outstanding concept and design work. Congrats!

Dec. 30 '07

heirophant said:

very nice. Perhaps making the buildings slightly more angular would make them stand out more. Great concept though. :)

Dec. 30 '07

Lawrence Anderson said:

Very clever. The only other concept I could even come up with is a skyline of wine bottles, but this is much better.

Dec. 31 '07

bpotstra said:

I have to disagree with the addition of the rooftop shapes. I think it was stronger without the chimneys and antennas and such. Perhaps if you just angled the rooftops to show some perspective, but don't add so much fine detail that would get lost in small scales. Also, a not on your type: perhaps its an optical illusion, but the word 'CITY' seems more loosely kerned than the word 'DRINKING'. Just add some more space in there and I think it will really shine. Good work!

Dec. 31 '07

ignari said:

I like it a lot

Jan. 01 '08

Brandsimplicity said:

I see you made the gallery...very cool!

Jan. 01 '08

itsgareth said:

we did ;) thanks again for all the input and feedback.

Jan. 06 '08

chad_hatz said:

i think adding windows will add alot. Yes scaling the image down may loose some of the windows but with just White windows you will be able to see it slightly to give the buildings that little extra something.. BUT rockin concept i love the look and feel, makes me want to grab a drink