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cmykgarden
by rambal
cmyk garden is an online portfolio for all print works of the client. They are going to use the logo only in the web.
Number of views: 2192
Dated Submitted: Dec. 12 '07
As seen on: http://www.cmykgarden.com

Dec. 12 '07

ClimaxDesigns said:

the type does work better here but i cant help but feel that its more because I'm used to seeing this typical treatment, why is cmyk bold and garden not? what significance does it hold? or did you do it like that because its trendy to do that right now?


Dec. 12 '07

rambal said:

In this logo I had tried something new in terms of mark and type. most of them feels that type doesn't fit with the mark. Sometimes I go with the majarity peoples opinion.

Still I'm not sure about the type. This type is safer and typical. Here I try to make the difference between cmyk and garden without give the space. That's why I make bold for the cmyk. (may be kiddish)

the type and the mark is blended and create the majical feel is happening in Very very rare case. behind there is a designer's effort and perspective also involved.

Still I'm a kid to do the logo in terms of type. (Now a days I'm confident in Mark) I'm learning here. Inspiring here. grow here.

Thanks man..


Dec. 12 '07

nido said:

@climax: when you say 'trendy to do that right now' i gotta admit that (apart from the fact i think it goes well with this) that ive been designing for seven years now... & matching up of type like this has been around for years!... & probably will be for years to come...


Dec. 12 '07

sonja said:

Hey Rambal, I don't think this is going to help you with your type decision, but i prefer the other one :) great work nevertheless


Dec. 12 '07

dache said:

Quite true nido, theres nothing new at all about having bold and regular side by side in logo design.


Dec. 12 '07

ClimaxDesigns said:

There may be nothing new about it, just like shiny buttons and gradients aren't new, but trendy and new are not always synonymous. Just because its been around for years doesn't mean that a sudden upsurge in its usage or the the defactones of its usage seemingly when all else fails, or rather the designer doesn't want to take the time to explore more complex yet simplistic options, doesn't make it right for the job automatically and doesn't answer my question as to the import of cmyk over garden.

I'd be interested to hear some arguments as to the validity of this 'safer and typical' type usage from some of the top tier designers on the site as it would help to shed some light on the issue and maybe spark some debate, I think that would help rambal in determining if this is the best option for this particular logo.


Dec. 12 '07

nido said:

As long as you are capable... anything can be justified.


Dec. 12 '07

ClimaxDesigns said:

I am asking for someone to justify it thought :D, it's not enough to jsut say, ok there its justified, what are the reasons behind the idea? If a client asked you why did you do that, what would you tell them?


Dec. 12 '07

KGB said:

today's world is very domain driven. numerous companies are known by their domain name and domains don't have spaces. The only way to make the words read is to use initial caps, color breaks, or bold/regular. That's why you see a lot of this these days. Well, that's my opinion anyway. CMYK is bold here because it is shorter in letter count and making it bold creates a balance between the shorter "cmyk" and the longer "garden".


Dec. 12 '07

ClimaxDesigns said:

Ah finally an answer i can sink my brain into, I think you and I actually had this conversation on another thread KGB, I wish others would join with varying opinions surely this has been around longer than websites have been.

At any rate Rambal there is a solid argument for your reasoning on doing something like this. i still suggest toying with the font, Bart made a good suggestion of using a more rounded font to match the round mark, perhaps a avant garde or century gothic.


Dec. 13 '07

OcularInk said:

In my opinion, following trends is something any designer should steer clear of. Leave the trends for the cookie cutter logo firms. While at times, these trends seem like the right thing to do, in the long run, I feel the logo will become washed away with all the other logos using this same type treatment. It shows no creativity on the designers end. Keep in mind, typography is just as important in the logo process as is coming up with the logo icon. If not more important.

Another way of keeping the words together (to add to what KGB said) is using different type faces to break up the two words. But even so, that may not work for this particular brand. Honestly, I think you can get away with a space between the CMYK and Garden. Web domain or not, these days people will assume that the company name is also the domain name. And if not, the domain name is usually a part of the logo itself.

In a nutshell, stay away from trends (unless you are the trend setter) if you want to stand out above the rest. Something else to consider is the key audience for this logo. From what Rambal said, the key audience are creative people. Going with this sort of type treatment does not say creative to me. I think your audience will expect something else. In fact, it might be best to just keep it as simple as possible, and let the icon do all the talking.

Even so, you did a nice job. With some more type exploration, this one will be pretty solid.


Dec. 13 '07

rambal said:

More serious conversations and perspectives.
Thanks to share.
I do agree all of your points.
I'm taking forward your advices.
Still I'm exploring the font. But, I'm not satisfied.
Propablly, I create one or found one.

Thanks a lot friends.


Dec. 13 '07

logomotive said:

This looks much better Rambal. Nice one, why not upload to gallery?


Dec. 18 '07

KGB said:

I like this face. Just check the kerning between y and k & r and d.


Jan. 29 '08

orfek said:

simply colorful and lovable! amazing. KGB is right, something is a bit off in the kerning btw Y and K.


Aug. 01 '08

Type08 said:

Very nice showcase Rambal... You're killing it!


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