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Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- Freemans Flowers
- by bartodell
- (Updated with some minor tweaks.) Concept for a friends flower business in my hometown.
- Number of views: 2047
- Dated Submitted: Nov. 30 '07
- Added to Gallery: Nov. 30 '07
Nov. 30 '07
admarcbart said:Thanks Amy but there are reasons for the spacing. I like for my logos to breathe.
Nov. 30 '07
logomotive said:I knew this was one of yours, looks like you found a new style (nitch) and have increased your type arsenal. I like the timeless look of your latest designs. Nice and refreshing. Keep up your excellent work.
Nov. 30 '07
admarcbart said:Mike... Honestly this is scary. I feel like I am being type cast because a lot of people are requesting this look from me. And yes type arsenal has grown quite a bit. :)
Nov. 30 '07
ryantoyota said:About the type... I love it, but I suggest tweaking one e to make it look more handwritten. Normally it wouldn't be so noticeable, except that they're right beside each other. It's the only imperfect thing that I noticed about this logo.
Nov. 30 '07
logomotive said:I CAN relate, I mostly get asked to design "illustrated" logos. :-) I guess it can be a good thing and sets you apart from the rest.
Nov. 30 '07
ClimaxDesigns said:8... I think you could nudge the type to the right just a bit for more visual space, the capital f is cramming it ever so slightly, I know its pixel centered but visually, prob needs a bump.
Nov. 30 '07
logomotive said:Bart ya know I love yer excelllent stuff but agree perhaps a smidget to the right?
Nov. 30 '07
admarcbart said:Yeah I think I am going to rework the Capital F a tad. I agree after looking at this online. Great ideas guys.
Dec. 02 '07
firestorm888 said:I would love to receive anything with this logo on it - could also work for a pie or candy company. Exquisite.
Dec. 03 '07
drewboy said:Bart - really good colour scheme (as usual!) - I see why you have made the 'm' into a stalk, but it now looks too much like an 'h' to me. That plus the 'an' & I read 'Freehand' - but maybe I'm just too old... I agree with Ryan that the 'ee's are too similar. If you make one look slightly different it will be spot on.
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Nov. 30 '07
amyblandford said:I like this one a lot- my only recommendation would be to enlarge the middle parts a bit, so they fill up more of the oval & there isn't quite as much red around it.