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Freemans Flowers

by bartodell • Uploaded: Nov. 30 '07
Gallerized Nov. '07 903996f68ba0177ab137a65ae1f13f94.png
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Description: (Updated with some minor tweaks.) Concept for a friends flower business in my hometown.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Not seeking critique, comments fine

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amyblandford said on Nov. 30 '07

I like this one a lot- my only recommendation would be to enlarge the middle parts a bit, so they fill up more of the oval & there isn't quite as much red around it.
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admarcbart said on Nov. 30 '07

Thanks Amy but there are reasons for the spacing. I like for my logos to breathe.
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logomotive said on Nov. 30 '07

I knew this was one of yours, looks like you found a new style (nitch) and have increased your type arsenal. I like the timeless look of your latest designs. Nice and refreshing. Keep up your excellent work.
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admarcbart said on Nov. 30 '07

Mike... Honestly this is scary. I feel like I am being type cast because a lot of people are requesting this look from me. And yes type arsenal has grown quite a bit. :)

ryantoyota said on Nov. 30 '07

About the type... I love it, but I suggest tweaking one e to make it look more handwritten. Normally it wouldn't be so noticeable, except that they're right beside each other. It's the only imperfect thing that I noticed about this logo.
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logomotive said on Nov. 30 '07

I CAN relate, I mostly get asked to design "illustrated" logos. :-) I guess it can be a good thing and sets you apart from the rest.
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ClimaxDesigns said on Nov. 30 '07

8... I think you could nudge the type to the right just a bit for more visual space, the capital f is cramming it ever so slightly, I know its pixel centered but visually, prob needs a bump.
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logomotive said on Nov. 30 '07

Bart ya know I love yer excelllent stuff but agree perhaps a smidget to the right?
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admarcbart said on Nov. 30 '07

Yeah I think I am going to rework the Capital F a tad. I agree after looking at this online. Great ideas guys.
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admarcbart said on Nov. 30 '07

Updated with some minor tweaks from ideas above and my own thoughts.

firestorm888 said on Dec. 02 '07

I would love to receive anything with this logo on it - could also work for a pie or candy company. Exquisite.

drewboy said on Dec. 03 '07

Bart - really good colour scheme (as usual!) - I see why you have made the 'm' into a stalk, but it now looks too much like an 'h' to me. That plus the 'an' & I read 'Freehand' - but maybe I'm just too old... I agree with Ryan that the 'ee's are too similar. If you make one look slightly different it will be spot on.

mintidea said on Dec. 28 '07

What's the type on this logo for Freemans? is it Handsome Pro?

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