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Boy Can Fly
by BoyCanFly
Self Promo, Alter ego Going for rough draft feel. Another type logo to follow that will act as a replacement when needed for smaller printing.
Number of views: 712
Dated Submitted: Nov. 16 '07

Nov. 16 '07

rfrusso said:

I like the feel of this. Good job and best of luck!

Nov. 16 '07

Boycanfly said:

Thanks rfrusso... I have been working on this now for 3 years trying perfect it. Especially in regards to the concept of cardboard wings shedding feathers. I am really hoping to get some feed back from more people. Thanks again for the kind words.

Nov. 16 '07

raja said:

Hi- don't have too much to time to critique - but overall feel is great in this logo - can't forget it

Nov. 16 '07

cobaltcow said:

i think its great BUT i think it would add more humour if he was still on the ground. it looks more like he's levitating at the moment.

i think the 'belief' of flying has a much stronger image than actually doing it with crappy wings (that aren't moving).

Nov. 16 '07

BoyCanFly said:

I was trying to convey belief in yourself can make things you felt impossible, possible. I choose to make him levitate instead of flapping because flapping comes off as arrogant like " I know I can fly" instead of believing and finding that your feet are no longer touching the ground. As in the story about the Little Engine that Could "I think I can, I think I can" ...if that makes sense :)

But seriously thanks for the comment I appreciate it a lot! Food for thought.

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