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McKay's Bakery
by bartodell
Logo concept for my cousins famous bakery in Abilene, TX. So next time you are in Abilene, stop by and get some great baked goods. The desserts are to die for.
Number of views: 913
Dated Submitted: Nov. 14 '07
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Nov. 14 '07

logomotive said:

Don't tell me they did not like the other? this is nice but not in the same league as your others. I mean they "Totally" said Bakery.

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Nov. 14 '07

sdijock said:

Nice, but I think you should use the brown as a solid drop shadow behind "McKay's". It's a little strange (and off-putting) the way the type breaks through the brown border and then has a brown outline around the ends of it. If you used a brown drop shadow it would help to unify the logo and help "McKay's" to pop out more. Just a suggestion.

Nov. 14 '07

admarcbart said:

@ SDIJOCK, That is what was bothering me. It is nice when you stare at something for a while to have fresh eyes look it over.

@ MIKE, Its family and you know how it goes sometimes. "Can you give me one more idea?" LOL

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Nov. 14 '07

sdijock said:

Wow! That worked great. Glad I could help. Beautiful logo (even before I suggested anything).

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Nov. 14 '07

rambal said:

looking first its nice... i like it.

Nov. 15 '07

Thomas said:

Lovely!

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Nov. 21 '07

nido said:

i agree with Mike... other one was nicer & said 'bakery'... this one says more 'potato chips' to me... hmmmm potato chips... but your right about one thing... never work with friends or family... or drug dealers!

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