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Real or Fake client not set I am actively looking for critiques
- Ecard
- by rambal
- Online Shopping company. Its a payment gateway. Name yet to finalise from client side. But, the Name starts with E. So I had incorporate the E as a shopping cart. I'm looking for your valuable comments.
- Number of views: 4205
- Date Submitted: Nov. 10 '07
- Added to Gallery: Nov. 10 '07
Nov. 10 '07
ryantoyota said:Great concept, but the shape seems unpolished to me. I feel like the handle should either be the same thickness as the rest of that line (which is kind of odd that it's thicker than all the other lines), or you could style it to look more like a shopping cart handle. The wheels seem a tad too close, as the gaps would fill in when printed at small sizes. Finally, I don't know if I like the way the bottom of the e finishes so sharply, when everything else is rounded. It feels like it's breaking the style. Nothing major, I just feel it could be cleaned up a little to really shine.
Nov. 10 '07
webing said:It's a nice icon, congrats! I'd like to see the typeface.
Nov. 10 '07
admarcbart said:I would have to agree with Ryan on some aspects of his comments. I think with a little refinement this would be an awesome mark!
Nov. 10 '07
OcularInk said:I agree with ryantoyota. While the concept is great and it looks nice, I feel it can be developed further. Some quick polishing would make this perfect. Lets see it with type. :-)
Nov. 10 '07
firebrand said:Yeah, yeah Ryantoyota's right. I agree with everything he says. Also, the angle on the left needs to match the right.
Nov. 11 '07
ScottB said:Brilliant!
Nov. 12 '07
rambal said:Dear all thanks for your support.
Thanks for your valuable comments. I'm working on the mark.
Soon I'll post it for your review.
Nov. 12 '07
amyblandford said:very cool!
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Nov. 10 '07
Beklad said:Is my comment valuable enough?:
I LOVE IT!!