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Moovad

by elementdw • Uploaded: Nov. 09 '07
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Description: Logo Concept for mobile marketing company.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Not seeking critique, comments fine

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ClimaxDesigns said on Nov. 09 '07

i think you should just center the tag line this looks unbalanced and forced.you could try making the double o combination the red and yellow circles, also be careful, this looks like mastercard.

ryantoyota said on Nov. 10 '07

What's your reasoning for linking the Os? I ask because not only does it resemble Mastercard a little (especially with the color scheme you've chosen), but it also makes the logo feel locked or chained in place, which doesn't imply that it's mobile at all. Your bubbles kind of add to that immobility in two ways: they're overlapping, which makes them feel tied together, like they can't go too far, and your speech bubbles are contained within circles, making them feel limited in their scope. Sorry to say it, but overall I get a very claustrophobic and immobile feeling from this logo. The only thing that does make it look mobile is the unbalanced tagline.

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