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Don't mind critiques, but I'm not actively looking for them
- Bambini
- by elementdw
- Logo Concept for children's clothing line.
- Number of views: 556
- Dated Submitted: Nov. 09 '07
Nov. 09 '07
OcularInk said:I agree with admarcbart, alto, nido, firebrand, admarcbart, raja, and ryantoyota. And I agree with Bambini too...whoever that is.
Nov. 09 '07
admarcbart said:Seriously though. I think if you went with a nice slab serif typeface, it will be great. Has that retro 1950's almost feel.
Nov. 09 '07
elementdw said:thanks for everyones input! maybe your right bart, the thing i like most about it is the bird, not so much the text...
Nov. 10 '07
ryantoyota said:Well, it's a good font in that it communicates it's for children very well, but it just has a few distracting elements. Like I said, the m is what's distracting me the most. It just seems too drawn out, and happens right at the curve or transition point in the text, so it makes you pause when you read it, causing a break in the flow.
Nov. 10 '07
admarcbart said:Ryan has avery good point, I think this is the area of the copy that is hanging me up. I still think a nice slab serif typeface would look great.
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Nov. 09 '07
admarcbart said:I love the bird illustration, however I am not liking the curve on the font. It seems a tad distracting.