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Abbie Carter Photography
by Thidan
A concept created for a friend who does mostly wedding photography.
Number of views: 359
Dated Submitted: Nov. 07 '07

Nov. 07 '07

BJM Design said:

The flower NEEDS to be incorporated into the text. The whole thing seems too seperated to me, and too large.

Also consider a more straight up san-serif for the 'Photography' text perhaps?

Nov. 07 '07

admarcbart said:

There is way too much going on here. As there is no real focal point for the viewer to focus on. Pick one and go from there.

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