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Little Bird Events
by inko9nito
Logo for an event planner.
Number of views: 4486
Dated Submitted: Nov. 05 '07
Added to Gallery: Nov. 07 '07

Nov. 06 '07

Glavnicky said:

Cool Bird =).

Nov. 07 '07

jacquiv said:

Nice

Nov. 08 '07

itsgareth said:

The colour scheme is lovely but the shape you have used to create the bird is somewhat of a design cliche IMO. I don't like how the mark is slightly off centre compared to the type. Another small point you've put "evenfs" on the one on the right.

Nov. 08 '07

onesummer said:

itsgareth is right. also get rid of the "glare". also the white on cyan on the right version doesn't work so well. mark also loses detail at smaller sizes (i.e. legs, beak, and feather top seem to almost dissappear). cool logo, just needs some adjustments IMO

Nov. 08 '07

dache said:

It reminded me of one of the first gallery items on this site : Artica":http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/104

Nov. 08 '07

insomnisdesign said:

I agree dache, was looking for that logo.. looks pretty similar to me.

Nov. 08 '07

inko9nito said:

@itsgareth: The original was actually a t, but it made it look like an f after I sized it down, for some strange reason. I didn't notice it until it was uploaded.

@dache: wow that's a really nice logo. However, the samples of bird logos that the client sent me were sort of abstract, so I tried to make something abstract as well. I started with a circle, added a triangle as a tail, then a white wing. The wing looked boring so I added a smaller shape inside. Tried to spice it up with the "shine" effect but I think I could've done without that.

Nov. 09 '07

Rambler001 said:

i wonder how it would look without the circle behind it.
The bird is strong enough to stand on its own.

Nov. 09 '07

Art Machine said:

Not so little bird is it? :) As a matter of fact a pretty fat one.
But I really like the design nonetheless. It thought it would be cool drop 1 of the "outline shapes of the bird" and shrink down the bird (in order to make it little) and then make feet, beak and eye stronger.
Just a thought. Nice anyway.

Nov. 15 '07

pixellounge said:

I love this logo, I think I would prefer it without the highlight/shine effect but great work!

Nov. 22 '07

inko9nito said:

@pixellounge: thanks! Just saw your site - love your work.

Nov. 22 '07

inko9nito said:

Thanks everyone for great suggestions. Unfortunately I can't make any changes now because the client isn't sure if she wants this version of the bird or the one I uploaded earlier. If she picks this one I'll definitely do some more work on it.

Jan. 04 '08

raja said:

This is good work

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