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I am actively looking for critiques
- lalomba
- by Brandon Barnard
- Our client is a talent musician /singer who is starting thier own record company. the Word is venda and means "Always sleeping" this name was given to her as a baby because she was always sleeping. She wanted a silhouette of her face. Some thing timeless.
- Number of views: 3580
- Dated Submitted: Nov. 05 '07
- Added to Gallery: Nov. 05 '07
- As seen on: www.magents.co.za
Nov. 05 '07
ClimaxDesigns said:very nice, could you please use the template size in the upoload section this is a few pixels off. notice the way the a and o are 'cracking'
Nov. 05 '07
ClimaxDesigns said:email me if you are having issues with this one, cant really have it on the front page like this
Nov. 05 '07
sdijock said:Beautiful mark. Nice work.
Nov. 05 '07
clashmore said:What happened? I thought this was in the gallery...?
Nov. 05 '07
ClimaxDesigns said:it was but then there was mix up when he tried to reupload it, still seems a bit off is that first 'a' supposed to look like that? anyway beyond the tech this is a great logo
Nov. 06 '07
dache said:Brandon, its 325×260 :)
My favourite part of this is the neck part, nice, colorful and a bit more simple than the top left of her hair which I find a little complicated. Not sure if it needs underlining the type.
Nice logo all in all.
Nov. 06 '07
brandon Barnard said:thanks dache i always like to hear what you have to say, i have great respect for your work!
Nov. 06 '07
dreamerworx said:Is this here real real silhouette? Or have you exaggarated some curves, cuz it looks a bit like a carton to me :)) Maybe a bit more feminine, elegant? Great stuff nonetheless :))))))))) Congrats on a great project a nd a job well done :))
Nov. 06 '07
brandon Barnard said:dreamweworx, this is her really profile, we refined it slightly she has bigger nose and fatter chin... so we are in a sense stuck with what we have to work with... i like the fact that her profile is not prefect that is what it makes in unique and original to her i do hear what you are saying interms of refinement
Nov. 06 '07
admarcbart said:I think this is a very unique mark. It has movement while being static. I like the subtle reference to music throughout the use of the lines as sheet music in the hair. Nice. Color scheme is very elegant but modern.
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Nov. 05 '07
firebrand said:Nice layered illustration and colours.