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- cycle sector 1
- by vld
- Logo for Cycle Sector, they manufacture and sell motorcycle parts and accessories.
- Number of views: 2663
- Dated Submitted: Nov. 03 '07
- Added to Gallery: Nov. 07 '07
Nov. 03 '07
webing said:I saw a motorcycle but I didn't read "cycle" because od the reflected C.
Nov. 05 '07
koodoz said:I agree with Beklad - This is the best out of the Cycle Sector logos. I also agree that a red or maybe even a rich yellow would work better. Pink, to me, suggests you sell mopeds/scooters.
Overall an excellent use of type. Well done!
Nov. 07 '07
ClimaxDesigns said:the word sector needs work, but how you have cycle here is insain! good work.
Nov. 08 '07
AL said:Very nice. However, I think where it works as an illustration, it doesn't necessarily work as a logo (too complex and hard to read I think).
Nov. 08 '07
onesummer said:yeah it took me a bit to read cycle, but i didn't care once i realized it forms an actual motor cycle. same with the sector. didn't like it until i realized it is supposed to be exhaust. pink just does not work here. i don't know many who ride pink bikes.
Nov. 08 '07
ClimaxDesigns said:you guys couldn't see this outside a cycle shop? I could:
http://logopond.com/img/cycle.png
Nov. 08 '07
OcularInk said:@ Climax - LOL!! Good one!
I think the logo can be tweaked some more to be perfect, but the idea is great. I agree with Climax. It could work well. :-D
Nov. 08 '07
vld said:Tnx guys.
I'm sure it needs some tweaking, especially the "smoke". Letter "t" do not fit well and overall thickness of the letters is not good.
I tried to stick to original helvetica style on the motorcycle as much as I could.
And now, PINK!
From the beginning I knew that this is not the style client is looking for so i didn't badger to please them. I just had to do it this way. I now it's somehow odd to make it pink but I like how it looks.
I'll upload a modified version soon.
@ Climax: I'm speechless! LOL
Jan. 05 '08
vld said:Tnx for the comments.
I made some changes, on color and word "sector".
Jul. 16 '08
vr4jen said:I think the cycle works so well on its own that sector is taking away from it. When something is that standout, you want to compliment it, not compete with it. I get the whole smoke thing, but... that's also an indicator of an engine problem ;) I'd find a nice, clean typeface and place "sector" on the bottom.
Oct. 21 '08
vld said:tnx vr4jen. Interesting opinion, specially this part about engine problem. I never thought of it...
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Nov. 03 '07
Beklad said:I like this one most. But maybe you could change the pink into orange, red, blue or green. Pink isn't attractive to your target group.