-
I am actively looking for critiques
- Corrib
- by lennon
- This is logo for Corrib - a shop selling fishing, archery and shooting equipment in Ireland. I tried to get all aspects of their business into the "fish"
- Number of views: 2102
- Dated Submitted: Oct. 31 '07
- Added to Gallery: Oct. 31 '07
Oct. 31 '07
firebrand said:The mark is clever. Not sure about the type. Maybe it's the colour?
Nov. 01 '07
Respiro said:Lennon, please allow me a second suggestion: http://www.psdlayout.com/suggestion.jpg
Nov. 01 '07
lennon said:Hi, Thanks for the feed back.
I can't actually make it the fish bigger at this stage although I do see where you are coming from.
As for the colors - black and yellow were the existing corporate colors, so my hands are kinda tied on that.
Graft I really like what you did there but I do need the services on there, also I feel the logo makes less sense without the services on it.
The client has asked to put cross hairs within the target now to hammer home the shooting aspect.
thanks again, much appreciated
Nov. 01 '07
chanpion said:One of the koolest mark I've seen for awhile. well done!
Nov. 01 '07
OcularInk said:ClimaxDesigns said:
cross hairs... so a bullseye doesn't scream target enough...
Seriously. Nothing more needs to be added to the icon. It's perfect as is!!
Nov. 03 '07
logomotive said:You also might try reversing the fish and writing it Archery,Shooting,Fishing?
Nov. 06 '07
koodoz said:logomotive said:
You also might try reversing the fish and writing it Archery,Shooting,Fishing?
Mike, why do you suggest that?
Nov. 07 '07
lennon said:Thanks for the suggestions guys. I'm afraid bar the crosshairs all has to stay the same.
I'm beginning to think that an increase in the size of the mark would have been nice.
Logomotive - not sure why I'd switch that? The order at the moment reflects each services importance to the business.
Nov. 07 '07
logomotive said:Well it's just my opinion and what I might personally do that's all. We read from left to right and when I create anything with an arrow in it I always try to give positive note as in forward progress and I feel the whole logo should work just like we read. Hey nothing wrong with it, just a personal choice. Again love the mark A LOT!
Please login/register to make a comment, registration is easy, signup
Oct. 31 '07
koodoz said:I quite like the idea. My only suggestion would be to make the 'fish' slightly more prominent, as it is a clever icon.