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Answer The Cry
by tammyhart
A more simple approach, as requested by the site owner.
Number of views: 367
Dated Submitted: Oct. 30 '07
As seen on: www.answerthecry.com

Oct. 30 '07

bad03xtreme said:

The background is to dark for me, I can barley see the cross. At first glance I thought it said answer heavy. Try it on a white background and a little more kearning.

Oct. 30 '07

tammyhart said:

thanks, but i need to b e able to make it work on a dark background since that's how it will appear on the site

changed the font

Oct. 30 '07

admarcbart said:

Tammy...

To be honest the typeface choice is too thin for my tastes. At smaller reproduction sizes this will easly break apart and loose clarity.

I would suggest a slightly thinner typeface with bolder characters to prevent this.

The insertion of the cross seems a tad cliche as well. As if there was not a lot of thought placed into the conceptual elements of this design.

My 2 cents.

Oct. 30 '07

tammyhart said:

i know the cross is cliche, it was the client request, but we're just wanting to get something simple, and will use some bold photos and graphics in the site design. This is a web only production, perhaps it will make itself onto t-shirts, but that wouldn't make problem with the font.

thanks for your opinion, that is why i'm posting here after all! :)

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