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- Modani mono
- by vld
- Logo for a designer furnitures reproduction company. One color version.
- Number of views: 988
- Dated Submitted: Oct. 28 '07
Oct. 28 '07
rambal said:all in one color is looking good than the previous.
Nice mark...
Oct. 29 '07
Art Machine said:Yes, indeed the concept is really good. But maybe the back of chair could be a little higher. In that way it might look less seperate from the M. Anyway, nice.
Oct. 30 '07
spasquini said:Wonderful idea ... perhaps the beginning of the vertical arms of the chair, from the not-M square, would help to recognize the chair (I had to focus for a few secodns to understand).
Oct. 30 '07
admarcbart said:I absolutely love the concept however I agree with the others in that it takes a minute to recognize the chair. This would be especially hard without the description.
This could be achieved by adding the vertical arms in part or in whole as mentioned above.
Nov. 08 '07
vld said:Tnx for the comments!
It seems that it looks better in one color than the first (two-color) version but the chair is harder to spot.
I did try to make it more obvious by adding or modifying the back of the chair, but then it's too obvious , and I don't like it. I don't think it's a problem if it takes some time for spectator to notice the chair.
@Beklad: it's true that it don't looks to "modern". I chose serif font because the chair also has "serifs"
Dec. 12 '08
cerise said:Well done, first time I've seen this
Dec. 12 '08
gyui said:me too, this is very creative!
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Oct. 28 '07
Beklad said:The back of the chair isn't aligned well. It should be more at the right. But I really like the idea. Maybe another font for "odani" because it has to be modern. So you should use a sans serif font.