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Primary Water
by AL
A logo for a company providing clean water dug from underground resources.
Number of views: 495
Dated Submitted: Oct. 26 '07

Oct. 26 '07

ryantoyota said:

Very cool mark, but the font looks a little weird. I like the ry glyph, but I think it needs to be tweaked a little. Give the y more definition and close up the gap between the a and the r. I also don't care for the layout. I think "Water" should be more centered, which would disjoin the y and the W, which would serve to give the y a little more definition.

Oct. 26 '07

firebrand said:

It's an unfortunate coincidence that this looks like brady's Bereavement logo.

Oct. 26 '07

AL said:

@ryantoyota: did you try to center the wording? I did and it looks boring ;) Agreed as for the letter spacing - not perfect.

@firebrand: I'm sorry but I don't think brady's logos look like mine. Or maybe I'm blind.

Cheers!

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