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I am actively looking for critiques
- christian escajadillo ceramics
- by webing
- I'm a freelance graphic designer. I'm making a debut as a ceramist also. My ceramic pieces are handmade and unique.
- Number of views: 639
- Dated Submitted: Oct. 23 '07
Oct. 24 '07
agencianove said:this looks a lot like the freedom now logo: logopond.com/gallery/detail/18587. Anyways... still a good concept.
Oct. 24 '07
webing said:thanks guys!
Oct. 24 '07
firebrand said:Nice mark. Slightly overpowering type though.
Oct. 24 '07
webing said:I respect your work guys, what would you suggest? to change it?
I drew it for myself and I need it to work for stamping it in my ceramics, it has to be easily read...
Oct. 24 '07
admarcbart said:I think if you went with a nice and clean, but unique sans serif or slab serif you would be doing a good thing.
Oct. 25 '07
webing said:I tried different typefaces but I prefer this one. I'll make my icon a little bit bigger.
thanks guys!!!
Oct. 25 '07
clashmore said:Yikes, don't do that. The typeface you're using right now is nice, but not in this context. It detracts from the mark. Do what Bart said.
Oct. 25 '07
logomotive said:I agree with admarcbart and clashmore, the reason this typeface is a bit condensed for the mark. perhaps something with a lower height like "Fritz or Talking Five" from myfonts.They also have a bit more natural or organic feel as does your mark.
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Oct. 24 '07
artboy said:Nice idea.