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COLLORE
by paulovictor
été haute couture
Number of views: 973
Dated Submitted: Oct. 21 '07

Oct. 21 '07

DR3AM said:

I think it's beutiful. expensive and a pain to print ^^ but the illustration itself is just great. whats "été haute couture"?


Oct. 21 '07

TernaciousT said:

I thinks its nice but a little OTT, maybe you can pull it back abit. (Multicoloured sperm type shapes attacking an egg are what I am seeing and thats a little strange!) The collection of circles, squiggles etc., look like they have been placed with no real thought but maybe thats what you want to show. Haute Couture in fashion has no boundaries so maybe the logo works in that aspect but I'd like to see it just calmed down alittle with more of a concept and layout to the shapes.


Oct. 23 '07

frontend said:

I like it. Of course it's expensive and I'm going to assume money isn't a problem here.

The only thing I don't really like here us the R that's hard to make out.

DR3AM: "été" means summer in french. "haute couture"... well that's what it is. "Fashion" doesn't really cut it as a translation but I guess it points you in the right direction.


Oct. 23 '07

paulovictor said:


Thank you for the comments.


Oct. 24 '07

nelliyana said:

may i know what font type this is?


Jan. 19 '08

ClimaxDesigns said:

"no real thought" this statement gets thrown out there a lot along the same lines as ' that's clean but I think its really insulting. how do you know there was no thought placed into how the elements where composed, why assume that there wasn't? It's like telling someone it looks like you just threw this sh&^ together :/

I think once again we are getting caught up in color expense, cmyk will reproduce this fine, every logo in the world doesn't have to be spot...


Sep. 12 '08

THEArtistT said:

Changing the color behind the R to something cooler will help the R stand out more. Summer High Fashion. I think it works. Looks like it took a lot of work as well.


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