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- by paulovictor
- été haute couture
- Number of views: 973
- Dated Submitted: Oct. 21 '07
Oct. 21 '07
TernaciousT said:I thinks its nice but a little OTT, maybe you can pull it back abit. (Multicoloured sperm type shapes attacking an egg are what I am seeing and thats a little strange!) The collection of circles, squiggles etc., look like they have been placed with no real thought but maybe thats what you want to show. Haute Couture in fashion has no boundaries so maybe the logo works in that aspect but I'd like to see it just calmed down alittle with more of a concept and layout to the shapes.
Oct. 23 '07
frontend said:I like it. Of course it's expensive and I'm going to assume money isn't a problem here.
The only thing I don't really like here us the R that's hard to make out.
DR3AM: "été" means summer in french. "haute couture"... well that's what it is. "Fashion" doesn't really cut it as a translation but I guess it points you in the right direction.
Sep. 12 '08
THEArtistT said:Changing the color behind the R to something cooler will help the R stand out more. Summer High Fashion. I think it works. Looks like it took a lot of work as well.
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Oct. 21 '07
DR3AM said:I think it's beutiful. expensive and a pain to print ^^ but the illustration itself is just great. whats "été haute couture"?