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Two Brothers Canoe
by vld
They manufacture and sell royalex canoe. Logo should represent adventure.
Number of views: 816
Dated Submitted: Oct. 20 '07
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Oct. 20 '07

Darrel said:

I like the typeface...what is it?

Oct. 20 '07

sebastienb said:

it seems that there is a 3d feel to the canoe but not the people. try to make it consistant

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Oct. 31 '07

vld said:

Tnx for the comments.

@Darrel: the typeface is Forkbeard Condensed.

@sebastienb: I wanted to emphasize canoe and make "brothers" look more like shadow.

Btw, first version was rotated 180 but I thought it's more fun this way :)

Dec. 11 '07

onesummer said:

I actually thought it was a hot dog at first. Though it was very funny thinking why two guys would be stuck upside down in a hot dog. now that i see it says canoe, I know better ;) nice work.

Apr. 08 '08

lifesaverservant said:

I laughed at the logo and I like it on a comedy point, but the logo does not say I should trust two brothers that I will trust with my life in one of their boats. (If they can't get into a canoe correctly should they be making them?

I understand the point though that the boat is not in the water and they are making it. I get that. My mind makes the connection that the boat is in the water at first glance.

Anyway just a thought. ;)

7804

Jul. 02 '08

vld said:

Thanks fort the comments!

... and no-comment sinking too.

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