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From Grandpa's Workshop

by Elpuser • Uploaded: Nov. 26 '12
Gallerized Oct. '13 7886b0c8ca6669ad9f3ca6742640afc6.png
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Description: they make toy airplanes

Status: Just for fun

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: simpleairplanebannergrandpavintage

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samdemastrie said on Oct. 19 '13

All the solid red in this piece makes it difficult to distinguish between the plane and the banner. Also, the blue in the background looks like it's popping through in front of the red.

cream5 said on Oct. 20 '13

I think you should add more whitespace between the cloud and the plane. Also around the engine and the wings. Overall a more thicker white stroke.

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