New Life Church

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Description: Logo concept for client.

Status: Nothing set

Commenting: Actively seeking critiques

Tags: churchlifenewnew life

ryantoyota said on Oct. 11 '07

You're pushing legibility with this one. I like the text, but I think it could use a bit more care and clarity. Your thicks and thins aren't consistent and it would be nice to get a bit of a crossbar on those Es so that they don't get mistaken for Cs.

Additionally, I don't think the NL circle adds anything to the logo, and it doesn't feel consistent with the look either. I don't see any reason for it.

roomforpanic said on Oct. 12 '07

Hey guys, thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it. I too felt the 'NL' was unnecessary, so I 86'd it for the final proof. I'm also trying it out in some other colors. I am curious about one comment about the inconsistency of thicks and thins - can you elaborate some more? Thanks again!

naweston said on Sep. 17 '13

@roomforpanic - are you still a member on here? I would like to get in touch with you about this logo please.

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