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Halo Church Sites: by tammyhart; I'm starting a new site that will market directly to churches and ministries; Number of views: 3053; Dated Submitted: Oct. 07 '07; Added to Gallery: Jan. 09 '08; As seen on: Halo Church Sites

Oct. 07 '07

chanpion said:

Superb! One of your best so far Tammy. Can't suggest anything concrete to improve this but just wondering what it would look like if you fade out the bottom half of 'halo'. But atm its great as is! Cheers.

Oct. 07 '07

tammyhart said:

thanks! :) here's the tentative design in case anyon'es interested: http://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k230/tammyhart/halo-designcomp.jpg

Oct. 07 '07

rambal said:

nice mark.
I like it.

Oct. 08 '07

chazthetic said:

Nice!

I'm in no way religious, and this one even pulled me in.

The website doesn't look bad, but how about trying something a little more "light" and "Heavenly?"

Also looks a little predictable, but nice!

Oct. 08 '07

tammyhart said:

thanks for your comments, guys

@chazthetic - I wanted to try not to be as cliche as I could, wanted to remain neutral. I also wanted to make the content easy to understand because a lot of my visitors will most likely be people that are anything but web savvy, thanks for the kind remarks! :)

Dec. 11 '07

influxes said:

oooh! straight to my favs!

Jan. 09 '08

Respiro said:

I have only one problem with this logo: it seems to be NOT a 100% vector work - the outer glowing from the 'circle' seems to be Photoshop work.

Generally, for uncompromised and unlimited scalability vector work is a must.

Jan. 09 '08

ryantoyota said:

I would generally agree with Respiro, except that this appears to be a web-only logo. Is that a correct assumption?

I think this works.

Jan. 10 '08

onesummer said:

very nice. While I've seen the "halo" around a letter thing before for angels and religious related subjects, this is a great version of it and works perfectly for the business, not to mention very modern and eye catching. well done.

as for the glow, like ryan said, this is most likely a web only version, so it obviously still works.

Jan. 11 '08

tammyhart said:

Wow, this is my first time to ever be on the front page of logopond. I am blushing over here! :)

Yes, this is a web only logo, but if I ever wanted to take it to print, the way I do my designs in Photoshop, I can easily scale this up.

The best version is viewable on the website, should I replace this one with the better copy?

Thanks for all the comments guys, I am humbled to have my work stand next to the other logo designers here that are a million times better than I could dream of being.